So after the last shop critique that I had about a month ago, I decided to get another one. The reviewers on Etsy remembered me right away, which I'm not sure is a good or bad thing. Overall, they didn't have too much to comment on my shop. The only comments they had left were:
1) Shorten the item descriptions so that they can be easily scanned by the reader
2) Post items more often to get more exposure!!
Number 1 was easy.
Number 2 will be a little more challenging...